Hello Forgehub, this is my first map that I am submitting (there may be more to come).

May I present to you :
Dictator V1.7 DL Link: http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Reach/FileDetails.aspx?fid=21284566&player=W0lf%20Gamer

Yes, it's another guardian remake, because I wasn't satisfied with other ones that I have played. Most of the jumps are there (apart from sniper bottom to sniper top), and moving through the map is as smooth as possible.
There is also no slow frame rate when all pieces in view.

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V1.7 is now ready = http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Reach/FileDetails.aspx?fid=21284566&player=W0lf%20Gamer
V1.7 changes:
- Added some more rocks
- more efficient pieces used
- Top of blue room now more aesthetically pleasing
- Gold light added again
- Sniper ramp now more curved
- Neatened up sniper ramp railings
- Cover for red spawn
- Sniper ramp more like original
- neatened up outer walls and ceilings
- narrowed shotgun hallway
- Added blue spawn roof & door
- Made gold room more to scale
- Made green area more accurate (thanks to PeteTacular 42 for pointing out errors)
- Made gold to blue lower ramp more curved
- added more walls to stop jetpackers escaping

[V1.7 pics will be up]

pictures:
Green area[V1.7] (jump to top mid works, concussion rifle spawn replaces brute shot)

Sniper ramp

Red spawn

Sniper top and bottom

Gold top entrance

Blue hall (with explosives)

Blue room (v1.6)

Blue spawn (v1.6)

Blue to gold jump (V1.6)

Blue window and lift (V1.6)

Bottom gold (V1.6)

Gold room (top) (v1.6)
Bottom mid (hammer spawn)

Camo lift to centre (V1.6)

Gold to blue room (v1)

Overview: (v1)

Weapon list:
Sniper rifle
Concussion Rifle
Gravity Hammer
x6 Sticky grenades

Ideal Gametype: Slayer DMRs

DL Link (V1.7):http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Reach/FileDetails.aspx?fid=21284566&player=W0lf%20Gamer

Thanks, W0lf Gamer