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Agony

This is my first map post here and if I did anything wrong please comment. I am looking for criticism as well as compliments.

Here is the story:
Start Transmission
As the squad took up positions outside town hall, the commander gave out positions that would be taken.
Fowl: "We don't exactly know what we're up against but it is probably just another riot inside. When they come out we'll be readAhhhhhhh!!!!!"
Conrad: What the Ahhhh!!
Ghost: "Fall back, Fall Back, these things are killing us. Run for it!!!"
*Screaming, shouting, and bullets are heard in the backround.*
Ghost: "All men, follow me to survive." (HINT HINT)
Roach: "I'll take point, I know the city well. The lab which is left of the L4D Post Office has a Sentinel Beam capable of terrifying damage. Let's open this thing up Ahhhh!!
Ghost: Head around the back! There must be another entrance! GrrAhhh!!!!
End Transmission

That's the story. Anyway, here are some pictures, I'll have some more up later. Please check it out though.

Gas Station

Overview

Ghost: "Fall back, Fall Back, these things are killing us. Run for it!!!"

You have been left 4 dead. Candy if you get the reference.

Ready Up

I know effects aren't visually appealing, but when it's dark, you can't see as well and it gives the scared effect.

Here are the download links:
Gametype:Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details
Map:Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details