Focus 1.0 comments:

Wow amazing map. The aesthetics are incredible! Coveyor belt definitly made it awesomer. I think the interlocking and geo merging was great. Everything about the map was AMAZING! One of the best maps i have seen. But what does the map reviewer say.
Map reviewer:
Overall:5/5
aesthetics:5/5
Unique:5/5
Interlocking:5/5
Geo-Merging:5/5
Lifts (grav lifts): 5/5
Use of Teleporters:5/5
Switches:5/5
Video: 5/5
YOU ACED THE TEST
I have never made the map reveiwer that long but you needed it.

Damn this is kickass bro. I like how the conveyor belt moves but the flag doesn't. Depending on gameplay this could be feature worthy. A real well made map. Good job sir.

Your design is flawless. Weapons are placed perfectly. It is absolutely stunning aesthetically. You took the simple idea of a conveyor belt, built an incredible map around it, and then took it a step further by making it look comepletely awesome.
Props to you, amazing job. 5/5.

Hall of Fame comment:

UN-FREAKIN'-BELIEVABLE. My god man this map is amazing.
Aesthetics 5/5
Gameplay 5/5
Forging Techniques 5/5
Originality 5/5
What more do you want? 5/5
Overall 0/5
Wait that can't be right...

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Download Focus v1.1

Created by ER1C0

V1.1 - Changed respawn system, added more cover, and some other smaller tweaks. Oh yeah, mind the conveyor belt! 2 - 6 players

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Misc. Info:
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Base: Foundry

Supported Gametypes:

Assault
Capture the Flag
Infection
Juggernaut
King of the Hill
Oddball
Territories
VIP
Custom Gametype(s)

Forging 101:

[ YES ] __Floating Objects
[ YES ] __Instant Respawn
[ YES ] __Immovable Objects
[ YES ] __Timed Map Events
[ YES ] __Effective Spawn Placement
[ YES ] __Gravity Lift Techniques
[ ___ ] __Objects Placed in Water
[ YES ] __Used Symmetry Option
[ YES ] __Interlocking Objects
[ YES ] __Objects Merged with Map Geometry
[ YES ] __Unlimited Budget Glitch

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Story:
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First, there was Convey. Then, there was Focus. Now, I bring you Focus v1.1!
This map is inspired by Pallet Parade by Cosmic Rick. In Convey I originally focused on the map's conveyor belt, then built around that. But then in Focus (renamed it, so actually Convey 1.1) I added some more objects, such as two geomerged moveable crates and the second floor lifts, which brought more cover and flow within the gameplay. And now in Focus v1.1 I've totally redesigned the spawn system edited a few of the game objects, and more.

I hope you like it!

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Description:
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Focus v1.1 is a small map made for small team battles. It's core value is to keep the player's nerves at the ready from lots of intense action going on all around them, causing them to "focus".

Here's what the map includes:

Three levels, including a ground level, a middle level, and a third level.
A drop/lift area on each base for going from the ground level to the middle level
A side lift on each base for going from the middle level to the third level
A conveyor belt with an "ON" switch which makes the conveyor belt move. The conveyor belt has the width of a pallets length, which means it's wider than Pallet Parade, but not longer.
Symmetrical layout with nothing unsymmetrical besides the two Spikers (on the red side) and the two SMGs (on the yellow side)

Here's what I changed:

Changed the spawn system so that players spawn in their given starting area, yet respawn away from enemy players.
Added Bridges and Single Boxes to keep players from getting out of the map.
Replaced a Bubble Shield with the Deployable Cover (at the yellow base).
Replaced a Bubble Shield with the Trip Mine (at the red base).
Replaced a Regenerator with the Power Drain (on the middle floor near the conveyor belt).
Added a BR on each side.
Added four Barriers for cover (on the middle floor near the conveyor belt).
Took away the two Regenerators (on the Ground Floor).
Took away the two Wire Spools (on the Ground Floor).
Added two barriers (on the Ground Floor).
Changed some of the weapon respawn times.

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Pictures:
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Overview

Red Base

Yellow Base

Red Base Side

Floor Lift (to sniper rifle)

Fixed Wall and Added Bridge (can't get out now!)

(left) The Lift and (right) The Drop

The Ground Floor (added barrels & barriers, took out the wire spools)

Middle Area of The Ground Floor (with sword)

Epic Crate Interlox

Outside (takes up most of Foundry)

How The Conveyor Belt Works:

1. Grab the Overshield.

2. This causes the Fusion Coil to drop into the ManCannon, which shoots the Fusion Coil and makes it explode, which causes the Pallets to break apart.

3. The pallets respawn back here and are pushed forward by Gravity Lifts below the Bridge. The Gravity Lift above the Bridge is meant to push any layered pallets off.

4. The Pallets go through the small tunnel and keep going as long as the Overshield is gone. The Overshield respawns after 180 seconds.

I hope that helped.

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Download Focus v1.1

BTW, the conveyor belt works best when played in Custom Games.