Hey all, this is my first post on the forums, and my first real map, as in, the first one I'm actually semi-proud of. It's not that great, but I thought I'd put it here anyway because it seemed alright to me. Please be honest about the critique and don't go easy on me please, I'd really like to improve.

Story:
The UNSC has been chasing the insurrectionist Japanese pirate ship, Dai-Furai. The ship has retreated into a small horseshoe-shaped canyon for cover while it re-fuels. The UNSC, at war with the Covenant, has decided to pull back their ships and send a group of commando Spartans to destroy the ship with a bomb.

Dai-Furai the Swift:

Gametype Details:
Players spawn with an Assault Rifle and a Plasma Pistol. Weapons deal 90% normal damage. Custom Power Ups are around every vehicle, discouraging you to get out of them once you go in because your speed is 50% and the gravity is 150%. Bomb arm and defuse time are normal, but bomb respawn time is 60 seconds instead of 30.

Armament (defenders)

Two Carbines
Two Plasma Cannons
A "mortar" (Scorpion)
Two Ghosts
Two Banshees
Spawn weapons
A trip mine
Tow Regenerators
A deployable cover

After 60 seconds:

Two extra plasma cannons
A Shotgun
Two brute shots

After 3 minutes:

Spartan Laser
Missile Pod

Armament (Attackers)
In addition to all the normal weapons on the map that are easily excessible, they also have:

A warthog
Two Hornets

After 1 minute:

Another Warthog
A Chopper

After 3 minutes:

A Fuel Rod Gun
Moveable Scorpion.

There is also a "relief zone" that spawns halfway through the game. It's pretty much a mini-base with only one opening and a lot of cover.

The map:
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