E-Coli H:0157

WTF? I know, I'm a mind reader. So before I go into details about this map I would just like to say a few things. For starters, I know this map isn't omg worthy, and I can tell you honestly right now that I'm fine with that. The point of me posting this map is for my personal growth as a forger. I'd rather be told what I did wrong, or what I need to do than that I did a great job. So please, critique me, share your wealth of knowledge amongst my eager self.

Now for the good stuff. . .

This map is built on the half of foundry that doesn't have the crap with the stairs and rooms, that half of the map is segregated because it is inadequate and I am a racist prick. If you were to cut my map in half anyway, I can pretty much guarantee it will fold over and align perfectly. The weapon and spawn points also coincide, the only difference is one side is invisibility and the other is overshield. This is one of the examples of how I place things to cancel out and make the map fair for everyone. Each tower has a turret on top and a sniper within the base. Snipers can eliminate the turrets, and turrets can get rid of people in the middle killing the snipers and so on and so on. The middle of the map where players battle in a circular arena for a Gravity Hammer placed in the center. Surrounded by scenery to hide and battle to the center, players will find themselves generally well covered from snipers, turrets, and random shots from opponents flying across the man cannons. Oh! The man cannons! They are placed on opposite sides to transport players from their home base to flank opponents on the opposite end. The man cannons do not shoot people on the same side of the map in mid air as in Narrows. Now let me go over a couple of the finer points for you.

Weapons:
Shotgunx2
Spikerx8
Smgx4
Sniperx2
Plasma Pistolx2
Machine Gun Turretsx2
Needlersx4
Maulersx2
Gravity Hammerx1

Equipment:
Plasmax2
Spikerx2
Invisibiltyx1
Overshieldx1
Powerdrainx1
Regeneratorx1

Screenshots:

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Edit:
Now images are up and you guys can talk less about the quality of the post and more about the content of the post, thank you.